Sunday 6 March 2011

Draft Double Page Spread #2


Changes I have made to my double page spread after receiving feedback.

3 comments:

  1. Well done Izzy. This is looking very promising, I'm not sure if the photograph would benefit from a small amount of text (in a small font) saying who took the photo etc. Also place a grid on it to see how well it matches the rule of thirds as very small tweaks can make huge differences in terms of balance.

    Once again well done, a good piece of work.

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  2. Thanks Sir,
    I've done what you said, is it worth giving in a paper copy of all my 'tweaked' drafts tomorrow? Miss said something along those lines.

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  3. You can, either myself or Mrs Somel will look it over.

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