Izzy, this is a very creative first mock up and has colours and fonts which will appeal to a female audience. On your other mock ups try and see what difference it would make if you didn't cover your model with text.
Also consider the use of capitals in your text, at the minute some words are all lower case whilst others begin with upper case and revert to lower.
Yo izzy :) I like the colour palette used, as well as the artistic fonts although I think that if the image was more centered and more of a closer mid-shot, it would be more effective to an audience. Especially eye contact - drawing them in ;)
I think the colour palette works great as well as the position of the image :) Something you could try out is changing the position of the text to enable the models clothing to stand out more which might appeal more to your female audience :)
I really like the use of colour and the font styles, the way the texts is layered works really well. You might want to consider not covering your model with a lot of text though.
I think this is good, but again, your other two newer ones look lots better and more effective/professional. So go with something more like the others :)Colour scheme and fonts work well though.
Izzy, this is a very creative first mock up and has colours and fonts which will appeal to a female audience. On your other mock ups try and see what difference it would make if you didn't cover your model with text.
ReplyDeleteAlso consider the use of capitals in your text, at the minute some words are all lower case whilst others begin with upper case and revert to lower.
Well done, a good start.
Yo izzy :) I like the colour palette used, as well as the artistic fonts although I think that if the image was more centered and more of a closer mid-shot, it would be more effective to an audience. Especially eye contact - drawing them in ;)
ReplyDeleteI think the colour palette works great as well as the position of the image :) Something you could try out is changing the position of the text to enable the models clothing to stand out more which might appeal more to your female audience :)
ReplyDeleteI really like the use of colour and the font styles, the way the texts is layered works really well. You might want to consider not covering your model with a lot of text though.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you've used your different fonts, it makes articles stand out more, but I think your model should be more visible. :)
ReplyDeleteI think this is good, but again, your other two newer ones look lots better and more effective/professional. So go with something more like the others :)Colour scheme and fonts work well though.
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